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ec807ce8 · Andrew Katz · Javier Serrano · 99c60130 · ec807ce8
Commit ec807ce8 authored Aug 27, 2020 by Andrew Katz Committed by Javier Serrano Sep 02, 2020
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--- a/user_guides/cern_ohl_s_v2_user_guide.tex
+++ b/user_guides/cern_ohl_s_v2_user_guide.tex
@@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ citecolor=blue]{hyperref}
 \SetWatermarkText{DRAFT}
 %\SetWatermarkScale{5}
-\title{CERN Open Hardware Licence Version 2 - Strongly Reciprocal \\ User
+\title{CERN Open Hardware Licence Version 2 - Strongly Reciprocal \\ User Guide}
-Guide}
 \date{\today\\Guide version: 1.0}
@@ -88,13 +87,6 @@ originals, will make life easier for people who want to understand your
 designs.
 For example, PCB schematics and layout can be exported as pdf files, and
 3D mechanical designs can be exported to the STEP format.
-Where possible, provide the design files in the version which provides the most
-convenience and information to a recipient, and if this a proprietary file
-format, also provide the information, where your tools allow this, in a form
-which makes it possible for licensees to read it using open source tools.
-In fact, it's a licence condition that you produce open-source-readable 
-files if your design incorporates anyone else's design licensed under CERN-OHL,
-CERN-OHL-S or CERN-OHL-W. 
 \begin{enumerate}[label=\textbf{\ref*{subsec:your-sources}.2}]
@@ -272,9 +264,8 @@ visible
    \item the licence notice: “Licensed under CERN-OHL-S v2”;
    \item the Source Location. 
  \end{enumerate}
-  \item \textbf{Suggestion: }You can optionally include a copyright notice to be printed on the Product (remember you must keep intact any Notices in the source, though), but do \emph{not} include the CERN logo (you may optionally include the CERN copyright
+  \item \textbf{Suggestion: }You can optionally include a copyright notice to be printed on the Product (remember you must keep intact any Notices in the source, though), but do \emph{not} include the CERN logo. You may include a copyright
-notice if your design includes portions of a design from CERN which contains
+notice. If you do, and your design includes part of other designs, you should at least acknowledge the work is not all your own by using Copyright \textcopyright 2020 Sam Smith and others. 
-that CERN copyright notice. If you do include a copyright notice on the Product, any it includes part of other designs, you should at least acknowledge the work is not all your own by using Copyright \textcopyright 2020 Sam Smith and others. 
 \end{enumerate}
@@ -374,5 +365,6 @@ must
 If there is something unclear in this guide, or you have any question on how to
 apply the licence, the best place to ask is the CERN OHL forum at\\
 \href{https://forums.ohwr.org/c/cernohl}{https://forums.ohwr.org/c/cernohl}. You may also find useful information in the FAQs at  \href{https://www.ohwr.org/project/cernohl/wikis/faq}{https://www.ohwr.org/project/cernohl/wikis/faq}.
+\end {enumerate}
 \end{document}